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"Yeah, My highest level is LV. 14, I doubt I would be of much help to you," Red said.- Divine176mthReplied to Death_Promise
nothing beats the tasty chicken...
"Also, since your elder brother is relocating to Yinxu Prefecture, it's a long journey. Go to the Law Enforcement Hall, call a team to escort him there, and tell them I said so!"detailUnlocking The Easy Mode Of Cultivation After Getting MarriedEastern · Faint Fragrance Of Red Beans - Divine176mthReplied to doom6561
ace trainer?
Caterpie had a Black (Monstrous) potential so I was going to sell it once I got out of the mines. After I said that, Zorua walked next to me and I carried her in my arms. - Divine171yrReplied to NoysCh 81 My best Pa treon deal. $7 to read 30 advanced chapters and $10 deluxe deal to read 50 advanced chapters plus all R-18 chapters and commissions at higher tiers $20 and higher[50 advanced chaps]
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just toss him in a whole where the mc is a simp and only picks one girl... save you in stealing girls that the idoits friendzone
Who knows I might toss Asahi into that world in the future? - Divine171yrCommentedCh 167 Chapter 163
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the author is pulling a dbz... plz don't
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I haven't found a novel that is good to reread, but I do have some that is good for killing time. Most novels here are really clique and repetitive. The moment someone talks about butterfly effects i tend to lose interest in the novel.
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I read 50ish chapter so far and feel some what burnt out... I got to say like most people. Cons. 1- to much info dump on stats. 2- to much nerfing. Sorry to say this, but he could have been op and be a chill mc at the same time would have been a good book to read. In your pace type of mc. 3- Continues from the nerfing is your forcing plot. like losing his arm, or forcing him to tank a op hit when he could have stop it. What the point in giving him massive amount of luck. 4- the system is useless... don't know why you gave him a system if you gunna nerf him everytime. Feels like the system = info dumps. Pros. There is only one and that is your writing is readable. In conclusion is your novel worth patron? No. When it be worth it? After you stop nerfing and info dumping your mc. Will you ever read my post probably not, but it will help other people to know what is the problems with this novel. So they don't have to repeatedly saying the same thing everyone else had said about the flaws on this novel.
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"butterfly effect" because you don't know what to write its an excuse no matter what you said. I have seen the some fanfic that didn't have this so called butterfly effects. the reason I am pointing this out is like what everyone always complain about the same repeat out line over and over again. I read fanfics is because I want to see the creativity of these writers, but if they can't break away from the story then might as well pick up the original and reread it instead. Best example is dc with the alt superman tell me how can they write superman so different with no butterfly effects. it is because the author was creative. in the end I just wanna see the cool stuff these writers can do with the story that the author didn't think of.
"I trained mostly on close combat weapons so I guess I'll take the [Bow] Sense to have some long ranged weapon in my arsenal. The problem that I saw regarding this Sense is the supply of the arrow but, where do I get a great supply of arrows?" - Divine172yrReplied to blkopler
naw it won't happen voldy is a mortal soul that is like a ant infront of a goddess that is millions of year old. Mostly gods and effect gods.
"Voldemort's princesses tiara from when his father didnt accept him coming out of the closest." I then threw Ravenclaw's Diadem in one of the space expanded bags so as to make sure Hestia wouldn't take it out and put it on as I was noticing Hestia being highly curious and probably sharing the stuff I was rapidly stuffing into the space ring as several pieces of the jewelry weren't put back after I left a note about how some of them were cursed and she responded that Freya was taking care of any curses, happy about being able to flex her Sorceress domain for a change. - Divine172yrCommentedCh 1 The Plot Goes On
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only when it's the first time between them or something important is going to happen...
Well, they fuck and I don't write the details because this is not important, right? - Divine172yrCommented
thinking like this will get you killed...
"Jokes aside." Rudy let out a weary sigh and uttered, "Scott hasn't done anything wrong yet. He is still thinking about it and trying to do it, but he hasn't. So I can't do anything to him even if I wanted to." - Divine172yrCommented
if your stuck make a outline of your mc and the people he met and the plots. so you don't always leave plot holes.
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imagine a very emo superman who tries to cut himself with kryptonite...
Half of it is focused on hurt, drama, self-harm, mental illness, and similar shit that makes me feel as if it was written by 13yo edgy mentally unstable emo angsty fangirls and I still can't wrap my head around WHY. How did an action-based movie such as Avengers --> self-harm, emotional drama, angst, etc? Just... how?