Ima make an honest review, little harsh. First of all, this story is gold, pacing is a little fast at times bit it perfectly fits the story. Secondly, the way you bring your character into the story is logical and fits perfectly as well, even side characters like the MC's parents are well made even if they hardly have any time in the story. Although the MC himself does lack a little personality. The power scaling is perfect, not too OP but he is getting there and its pretty well done. And next is the world building, honestly a little lacking but its not needed too much so it's perfect as far. Now as for your writing skills, they are quite good and your way of thinking only makes it better; and for someone who doesn't have english as their first language this is really impressive. Honestly the only real problem I see are those that haven't happened yet. For which I recommend an editor, or a discord or something. Aside from that I cant see anything wrong or lacking here, so good job man.

so underrated 😔 ....................................................................................................................................

This is so underrated. Most Jujutsu Kaisen fanfics are crossovers, with focus on Gojo or his powers. This however focuses more on the world and what it contains. I love it and hope to read more.

Definitely a good read! The power is unique and really good, it does not make him instantly op like Gojo or anything, he has to work for his power to go up, but his innate technoque could be considered to be one of the best in the world. That is considering all of the possibilities it gives. I will give a small hint at what his innate technique does for those who wish to know his power before reading. (He turns cursed beings into pills that have varying effects depending on how strong the cursed being was) 10/10 Reccomended!

The story was brilliant in the first nine acts but later became progressively irrational, another story doomed to failure.😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔

Kind and attentive author that is patient and happy to interact with the readers. story’s extremely enticing and indepth with how the mechanics of jujutsu Work. not to mention the powers the mc has are very original and fresh. I would honestly rate this higher than a five if I could.

i just wish more people did fanfic on jujutsu Kaisen. the grammar is overall really good. the only complaint i have is the shikamaru guy. (i dont really know why i hate him tho). this is book is really good [img=recommend][img=update]

Best jujutsu kaisen fan fic ive seen. I 100% recommend this fan fic.

I would like to start off by saying that this is the best JJK fanfic out the in my opinion, but to be honest there arent alot of them. Some things are lacking of couse as the story isnt that long for now (ch 13), so world building and character development cant really be top notch yet. On the other hand, grammar, writing and story are very well done. I especially like that the MC is an OC. With a pretty small cast and lots of unknowns I believe its a waste to not make an OC when doing a JJK fanfic. Most of the characters are very well developed so if a story is "Reborn as [Insert Character]" you kind of screw everything up. You dont really want to replace Yuuji/Sukuna or Gojo since their personalities are pretty vital to the series, so I believe an OC where you could be really imaginative with the innate technique is preferable. Which is what the author has done. Another thing to commend is the way the author is well read on the complicated power system of cursed energy and how it is balanced in a good way. Making a MC OP is not bad in itself, but making them stronger than Gojo for example would kind of defeat the purpose of Gojos character a bit. But in this story the power scaling is very well handled I think. All in all, I hope this is not dropped since I would love to read more and more of it!

The story was going well until... a massive drop in updates. I stand with UsedCreation on the specifics. Did you drop the novel? It's fine if you did. Sometimes the fire just goes away. But at least send some information.