Review Detail of Khoesis in Marvel 10000x Times Multiplier System- In Marvel With 10000 Multiplier

First things first, the grammar is lacking as to why is unknown but that could be better. Secondly, the MC is quite honestly logically impaired. He has neither brain nor common sense and it hurts really. Why would he give away a weapon to someone that knows about his secret and could really bring him into trouble if anyone finds her. Either hide her or kill her, only logical way he should have done. Thirdly, the fact that he just doesn't question any of the behavior is weird. I mean, I get that they try to get to seduce him because he "apparently" looks better but that they would do it so openly would make no sense. He also just doesn't question all of these nonesense and just brainlessly accepts it is truly baffling. The idea of the novel is good, however the application of said idea as a novel is disappointing and just too emotionally led by stupidity. Could be better with better writing quality and better ideas than just naked woman and kill.