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Vote here for having all POVs in one chapter when we do have more than one- Khoesis1yrReplied to Khoesis
makes a jump forward. Very interesting to say the least.
Just recalling how he played with the Moon not so long ago and that one moment of inattention could have made the Great Dying passes for a joke. - Khoesis1yrReplied to Ser_Gamma
There have been many events like The Great Dying, because everyone of these events of extinction was also a jump in evolution. For example, when the asteroid hit the earth and wiped out the dinosaurs 65 million years ago, around 90-95% of all species on the earth went extinct however also prompted a great jump in evolution for all surviving species. Mostly mammals. With every event of mass extinction, evolution follows. Very interesting to say the least.
Just recalling how he played with the Moon not so long ago and that one moment of inattention could have made the Great Dying passes for a joke. - Khoesis1yrCommentedCh 2 Reincarnation
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Granpa Pope pulled some strings.
"Then who… ah!" In an instant, Sylvester realized who the true patron for this gift was. - Khoesis1yrCommented
Pinnacle of Comedy.
"Conclude, I. Dependent too much on the Force you are, hmm? Happen, what if there was not any, what would, hmm? Jedi Code, the truth is. Emotions, unneeded are hmmm.", I remarked, she was like a shark in a desert of salt in the middle of a drought. Utterly fucked. - Khoesis1yrCommentedCh 26 Update
- Khoesis1yrPosted
First things first, the grammar is lacking as to why is unknown but that could be better. Secondly, the MC is quite honestly logically impaired. He has neither brain nor common sense and it hurts really. Why would he give away a weapon to someone that knows about his secret and could really bring him into trouble if anyone finds her. Either hide her or kill her, only logical way he should have done. Thirdly, the fact that he just doesn't question any of the behavior is weird. I mean, I get that they try to get to seduce him because he "apparently" looks better but that they would do it so openly would make no sense. He also just doesn't question all of these nonesense and just brainlessly accepts it is truly baffling. The idea of the novel is good, however the application of said idea as a novel is disappointing and just too emotionally led by stupidity. Could be better with better writing quality and better ideas than just naked woman and kill.
- Khoesis1yrReplied to reez00
It would, yes. However normal human behavior, just ignore the problem after it is "over". You know, just the usual.
The rain was red, like blood. - Khoesis1yrReplied to no_maidensCh 15 Predator