A great premise, a great concept added to the lack of knowledge and written on the fly in a simple way that in the end everything is so empty and forced that nothing feels organic is what you may think when reading this novel. But behind all that land there is gold and if the author takes his time to rewrite I feel that we could have a great fanfic.
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