Here I stop reading, what a stupid way to save her by adding a forced romance instead of subtly explaining that there are rumors about what Harvey is doing.

yes, it is interfering with the reading and depending on the size of the chapter it can be a lot

The dialogue between Will and Jerry was very rigid and expressionless, it seemed that they were reading a script and not talking to each other.

Although there are more chapters none of the fanfics is complete

I do not agree, there are quite a few chapters that are frankly useless and do not contribute anything more than filler words if people constantly complain in those chapters it will be for something.

It's ironic that everyone is upset with MJ when it was Gwen in the comics who was cheating on Peter with Norman Osborne and had children with him. It was basically a total NTR xD

It's ironic that everyone is upset with MJ when it was Gwen in the comics who was cheating on Peter with Norman Osborne and had children with him. It was basically a total NTR xD

Bruh forgive me for being rude but learn how pregnancy works, after inseminating a girl you will not see the result of a pregnancy test that thought seems so stupid and ignorant

They are two different religions but they have the same roots, no matter how much both parties deny it. And I'm not religious at all

How much baby do you have to be to cry because they mess with Muslims a bit? When he messes with Christians and Catholics, everything is fine, but as soon as he makes a mention of you, you are going to call them to hit him with the hammer. What a babycry you are

There is such a variety of weapons and you choose a bat ... and no it's not cool

I have to get this thorn out of my side and say that I am slightly disappointed when you turned Da Vinci into another girl as I thought this was one of those rare novels where the MC has friends at his core and is not only surrounded by girls. .. it's just something frustrating since from then on I find it difficult to enjoy the chapters to the fullest. With that said I can't wait to get more chapters xD

A great premise, a great concept added to the lack of knowledge and written on the fly in a simple way that in the end everything is so empty and forced that nothing feels organic is what you may think when reading this novel. But behind all that land there is gold and if the author takes his time to rewrite I feel that we could have a great fanfic.

Yeah *Bad-Plot*

Search "Kloah"

Author, can you tell me in which chapter more or less returns to earth? It is that this plot seems a lot like a xianxia novel (this is not bad) and I just get bored since I am tired of them. I do not want to offend you or make you feel bad, I like your fanfic and I am very interested in the other plots that you are creating on earth

Terranova since it is going to be a new land practically, you could also name it Metaterra referring to the fact that it is the country of the Metahumans. It is stupid not to change the term mutant as it is degrading and racist as it is used in a derogatory way in Marvel. And you must also solve the matter of materials since no country can survive without exporting something, be it raw materials (Minerals, wood, steel, coal, etc.), technology (see Japan as an example), or human resources (this can be denied since its population will be mutants).

The first thing Shield would do and more with Fury in charge would be to find out if what happened to Natasha was an isolated case or happens to all his agents, if so, find a way to avoid control or eliminate the suspect as a due priority. to the risk of information leakage. But it is a webnovel fanfic so I don't expect much and more when they are multiverse which are usually even simpler. Off-topic Good Fanfics that break this norm and that I use to measure the quality of others and I recommend they are - Carl the Jumper by Angormike (Good Multiverse Fanfic that shows how to build a plot around the trip and an exponential growth of the MC) - Dream Engine: Beta Tester…. D.C. Comics by Galen (A fanfic about a specific universe and with an incredible and complex plot, excellent original characters and that maintains the personality of the already integrated characters of the universe. Not for all the tastes and more of the general public of Webnovel since there are references to polyamory and many hormonal teenagers here are offended if it is not an alpha male who kills everyone who touches or speaks to his girls) - A New Player In The Force by USS Explorer (Excellent Star Wars fanfic) - The Adventures of Augment Gothic by Joe Lawyer (One of the best Star Trek Fanfictions you can find) After reading these recommendations you will understand why most of the fanfics here feel like seeing a child learning to walk while other people say they are the best fanfic out there (just ridiculous)

Akikan is lengthening because he is practically copying from a chinese novel (fanfic), so he said that it will be long and hence the origin of all the unnecessary dialogues.

Yes, honestly Adam has to accept what happened to him as he cannot change it instead of becoming an emo lord. I should have killed Priapo fast and so much drama is avoided