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MADE_IN_MEMES
MADE_IN_MEMESLv31yr
2023-06-13 22:45

14 chapters in you might think that isnt much your right i dropped this because this isnt what i was looking for i wanted a story about the games not a story about how the mc gets stronger unnecessary at that 14 chapters in and we only got 1 view inside the game you think with a title like that you would get more but nope i dont want to bother reading more i know il only get disappointed and dont get me started on how rushed the story was it felt like the author was trying to rush the story to get the story somewhere I know for sure this story was intended without the game making thingy because of the mc He says he was low on money, hmm strange he has a game make cosmetics but then i thought about why he may wanted a clean incoming for you know taxs BUT NOOO HE GOES TO ANOTHER COUNTRY USING THE AIRPLANE JOINS IN AN ILLEGAL FIGHTING PLACE FOR MONEY i was wrong I was confused i thought of this desision in a way without the game making thingy and it made sense i dont know why he wanted money but if it was for some plans it would make sense This entire fanfiction was seems to be intended without the game making system now I know I shouldn't bother reading further

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Unholy_Angel
4.5
42 Chs

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MADE_IN_MEMES
MADE_IN_MEMESLv3

not 14 chap but 16

1yr
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Unholy_Angel
Unholy_AngelAuthor

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AzagalPlay
AzagalPlayLv14

No romance and universe creation elements ? consider me hooked ! .

3yr
SOMMO_ARCANO
SOMMO_ARCANOLv2

the idea of ​​the story is good only that mc is flat and it seems that he has no relations apart from the home pc, there are 0 conversations of chapters are slightly short, it looks more like a diary than a story because mc in addition to training it seems that he does not have aspirations or cravings, it also seems easy to study magic as if he drinks water, the story is not about the games he creates nor how the players feel is very superficial, I think the author is new because even if the idea is good and innovative, the story seems flat and repeating, I hope the author improves both in the text of the story, the dialogues and the interactions, but also to lengthen the chapters and tell more what he does and what the players or npc do Sorry i used GT

3yr
KnightWriterRLK
KnightWriterRLKLv14

I'm here to give 5 Stars because I like the premise of this story. It's very unique and creative. Keep up the great work. I'll follow your story diligently.

3yr
empire1
empire1Lv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Story had potential with the game creating but then it became trash, then it became a dumpster fire. MC gets NPCs but they are actually real people so have fun with that..... but the worst thing is the awful OC they is with the MC. Makes no sense to create a random OC when there are so many characters in Marvel. Just awful. Then somehow professor X is able to find him? Trash. He tries to read his mind and the MC just says stop? Trash. Now the Ancient One found him but she wasnt able to before? Was it because or the trash forced part with Professor X somehow finding him? No idea but this was a complete waste of time that i regret reading. Dumpster fire of a fic

3yr
JayFireblood
JayFirebloodLv15

Good stroy with a few minor flaws, i.e doesn't really go into the backstory of mc ( might change in the future ), also mc isn't really hiding his powers but other than that its good. I wish to see were the author takes this novel. ( ch 14? )

3yr
Fallen_Swordsman
Fallen_SwordsmanLv4

i really like it hoping for more chapters i really like it hoping for more chapters i really like it hoping for more chapters i really like it hoping for more chapters

3yr
draculemorningstar
draculemorningstarLv4

it was good but then the protagonist started to share his magic with other people even though he himself isn't even in the top power levels yet.

3yr
mythoscribe
mythoscribeLv14

I loved the novel till now...the quality is good negligible to non existent grammatical mistake the only bad thing about the novel is you have to wait for it...😅😅😅😅

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