The Game Creator In Marvel(News) Book Review By HentaiElderVampire - WebNovel

HentaiElderVampireLv63yr

2021-10-02 19:16

Too rush. .. Seriously..it's great concept but the plot is too rushing. First he make battle Royale game and a little bit of reaction from the player. And than he make another 2 game?? Where's another reaction? Or when the player's use their golden apple reaction? And conflict? If you're don't fix it, it will become boring novel Use Chinese store owner novel plot, most of people enjoy reading those. Maximum Rezpect!!

The Game Creator in Marvel(News)

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HangerBabyLv11

i feel youre extremely wrong. the pace honestly isnt fast enough. in reality his games would explode after the first 1000 players at a pace unseen with its rewards and the way its played. Especially with shield being unable to shut it down

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HentaiElderVampireLv6

there's no reaction with game 2 and game 3, i feel like i'm reading summary chapters, if that not rushing than what?

HangerBaby:i feel youre extremely wrong. the pace honestly isnt fast enough. in reality his games would explode after the first 1000 players at a pace unseen with its rewards and the way its played. Especially with shield being unable to shut it down

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HangerBabyLv11

game 3? there is no game 3 and maybe the lack of game 2 content is that the mc/author dont really care for racing games and as such the author didnt feel the need to talk about it. or maybe that game is honestly not relevent to the story ever thought of that?

HentaiElderVampire:there's no reaction with game 2 and game 3, i feel like i'm reading summary chapters, if that not rushing than what?

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