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No romance and universe creation elements ? consider me hooked ! .

the idea of ​​the story is good only that mc is flat and it seems that he has no relations apart from the home pc, there are 0 conversations of chapters are slightly short, it looks more like a diary than a story because mc in addition to training it seems that he does not have aspirations or cravings, it also seems easy to study magic as if he drinks water, the story is not about the games he creates nor how the players feel is very superficial, I think the author is new because even if the idea is good and innovative, the story seems flat and repeating, I hope the author improves both in the text of the story, the dialogues and the interactions, but also to lengthen the chapters and tell more what he does and what the players or npc do Sorry i used GT

I'm here to give 5 Stars because I like the premise of this story. It's very unique and creative. Keep up the great work. I'll follow your story diligently.

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Story had potential with the game creating but then it became trash, then it became a dumpster fire. MC gets NPCs but they are actually real people so have fun with that..... but the worst thing is the awful OC they is with the MC. Makes no sense to create a random OC when there are so many characters in Marvel. Just awful. Then somehow professor X is able to find him? Trash. He tries to read his mind and the MC just says stop? Trash. Now the Ancient One found him but she wasnt able to before? Was it because or the trash forced part with Professor X somehow finding him? No idea but this was a complete waste of time that i regret reading. Dumpster fire of a fic

Good stroy with a few minor flaws, i.e doesn't really go into the backstory of mc ( might change in the future ), also mc isn't really hiding his powers but other than that its good. I wish to see were the author takes this novel. ( ch 14? )

i really like it hoping for more chapters i really like it hoping for more chapters i really like it hoping for more chapters i really like it hoping for more chapters

it was good but then the protagonist started to share his magic with other people even though he himself isn't even in the top power levels yet.

I loved the novel till now...the quality is good negligible to non existent grammatical mistake the only bad thing about the novel is you have to wait for it...😅😅😅😅