Writing Quality (3 Stars): Easy to read, without too much grammar errors. Stability Updates (5 Stars): The author is publishing one chapter per day. Story Development (2 Stars): The MC got a system that gives him no challenge (in the first chapters he steals Garp physical strenght, already making him one of the strongest person in the world and this only continue until he becomes perfect stealing form all the other characters). The second system is a chat group where the MC choose to invite only females. I think most of the readers already understand where this story is going. Character Design (2 Stars) : The MC is showed to be weak willed, to the point of crying for a system or other type of 'external' help at the beginning of the story. After receiving the system he has a total change of personality, becoming more secure of himself and saying that he will kill all his future enemies. All of this happened a paragraph. Other than that his only interest is women, the first thing he does is invite only women in his chat group and in the first village he goes he flirts with the female bartender. World Background (4 Stars): The story has One Piece as main world, while the other avaible worlds are, Fairy Tail, Tokyo Revengers and Against The Gods (in this case universe). The total score is 3.2 Stars and it's only this high because i dropped the story after 5-6 chapters without giving it more chances.

I don't know if this a translated work or author is a Chinese... But this is such a pile of cringe. It's unbelievable. Even if I try my best to doesn't see all those "catchy" sentence, we still have a very dumb work that's exist solely on system golden fingers and characters that have no brains - though I do laugh hard in one moment, where author was promising to make characters feels more "alive" .But I don't think that's how it's was designed, though...

Well... Idk, system is too overpowered and mc even got automatic strength rise at the beginning. Also story reads pretty much like cheap Chinese system novel, just a bit more refined. Author says this is not Chinese translation, but overall ridiculousness and how the story is told makes this pretty much 100% same. I mean mc reincarnates with same name body, check. Mc has ridiculous system that basically just gives him stuff, check. Mc harms nice characters (Garp, one of the best characters in OP) for no reason, check. And we even get impurities pushed out, check. Why not just make it so mc can steal one "destiny" from ones he defeats? And give him no start boost. This way we could get clear progression and interesting novel. I don't really understand the rating. "Story" is just so cheap, and system even cheaper.

I gave it 5/5 for the numbers sake, but if I truthfully gave it a score, perhaps 4.5/5. this novel / fanfic is an enjoyable read, I do like the main character, the plot is good and what I enjoy a lot is that the author doesn't mind straying away from the manga/novel plots, which I truly enjoy reading about. Tbh, if I wanted to read something that only follows the plot of a novel / manga, then I would have read that manga / novel, not a fanfiction. all in all, kudos to you, Author.

Not much to say except that its a fun read! This novel def deserves a higher rating(4.5) at the moment. If you can look past some grammar mistakes you’ll definetely enjoy it.

Well, I will admit that it is one of the best I have read, my friend, because it contains wonderful writing, interconnected events, an impressive story, and great characters, so the best of them is the hero, so this novel deserves my five stars👍👍

good enough to read but be warned you need to lower your IQ as much as you can to just read through this novel and don't think about anything else since there isn't any real plot in this novel

love the novel hope it's extremely long love the idea he should visit worlds of those who are in the group chat and missions and maybe at a twist of him being a heroic spirit who lived a bad gate and this life is a way a Rob who took pity on him gave him an opportunity of happiness the reason why he knows anime characters and stuff can be explained like one life he lived as a normal guy who loved novels and anime girls in 2nd life he was a heroic spirit now his in his 3rd life u can maybe send him to fate later on and gets his past powers and maybe save that universe or get revenge or something suprise me thank you sincerely for the novel may you be blessed p.s. plz don't drop the novel you know haters gonna hate ignore them they probably taking their own frustration on you stay calm and be awesome

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I NEED MORE AND WHEN I MEAN MORE I MEAN MORE LOOKS NICE EASY TO READ INTERESTING TO READ SO I NEED MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.