Well... Idk, system is too overpowered and mc even got automatic strength rise at the beginning. Also story reads pretty much like cheap Chinese system novel, just a bit more refined. Author says this is not Chinese translation, but overall ridiculousness and how the story is told makes this pretty much 100% same. I mean mc reincarnates with same name body, check. Mc has ridiculous system that basically just gives him stuff, check. Mc harms nice characters (Garp, one of the best characters in OP) for no reason, check. And we even get impurities pushed out, check. Why not just make it so mc can steal one "destiny" from ones he defeats? And give him no start boost. This way we could get clear progression and interesting novel. I don't really understand the rating. "Story" is just so cheap, and system even cheaper.
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The book are my personal creation and not translated from any Chinese site, I swear by that on my name, and you can search of it and denial me. Even if there is a little Chinese stuff here, it doesn't mean it's Chinese, Don't say nonsense without evidence bro
The most painful thing is that your personal work that you are burning your nerves with becomes a translation from a Chinese site in the opinion of a random reader
i feel your pain author. But don't down maybe this will improve your writing. Even me i thought that your story came from chinese translations. Just keep it up bro πͺπͺ
BlackStar_BH:The most painful thing is that your personal work that you are burning your nerves with becomes a translation from a Chinese site in the opinion of a random reader
i dont wanna judge something im not reading yet.. I WILL READ THIS for research and make my brain conatant work. I check all review start from high rating to low rating.. but i can tell why this reviewer is irritated with almost chinese novel. well, THIS IS webnovel created by cn company,(CMIIW) alotof chinese copy paste setting and plot line with ruthless and killing everywhere, i believe for almost all readers who read chinese novel will meet with murderer,genocider,schemer,sociopath,psycopath tendency. im not say ALL novel, but Almost, Almost cn novl have those tendency.. i dont mind killing, as long as mc kill/harm criminals, i.e bandit, corruption, rapist, pedophile and many more. destroying OG plot is fine either, coz this is fanfic, i understand those, so i cant picky with that. and now, with system with sentient and AI thingy,(except Great Sage tensura LOVE IT) mainstream and more absurb than other novel, you know sentient system = Annoying. its better use the gamer or solo leveling system OR just status screen like game without sentient/A.I i think this reviewer is got bored or irritated by that kind of system, the same plot line, unnecesary murder/harming good/neutral OG vharacters, so many many many SANcheck must be Avoided, 'coz if there any Implication the reviewer/readers deemed unOriginal, then you doom. im not say you are wrong Author. this is your work, you create this work, you love your works. and respect that. but still, every human is different. thanks and no offense, im gonna read this and perhaps will review if this read satiafy my hunger for reading. πππ
what to expect from Japanese anime story mixed with xianxia world, always hopeless, look at that list of unworthy harems, take random women like there is no better woman hahaha
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BlackStar_BH:The book are my personal creation and not translated from any Chinese site, I swear by that on my name, and you can search of it and denial me. Even if there is a little Chinese stuff here, it doesn't mean it's Chinese, Don't say nonsense without evidence bro
