Review Detail of Faelyon in Blood Lust An Undying Thirst

My first time reading and reviewing a first person story! I'm not the most experienced with this type of view but I'll do my best to review. The only thing I want to nag at a bit is that the story feels like Rhi is viewing everything as a small child. The descriptions are a bit strange at times, as well as the leap in plot. Overall I still enjoyed the novel and I'm looking forward to updates and revisions!