farendel_6929Lv32yr
2022-04-23 07:20
overall the story I want but it was done very poorly. qualiy was ok but it just the spacing and formatting just destroyed it for me it didn't make sense and difficult to diciper what the author meant. the story moves very quickly tooo quickly litteraly in the first few paragraphs the MC already met the god got all there powers and was sent to the other world not even any explanation on who the character was just the MC was there and that's it.updating is ok it's frequent enough that its better than like half of everyone else. no character design just "this is MC and he is wearing a shirt" next scene....this is litteraly how it is
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