harem again....... can you all get this out of your heads. nobody wants his/her wife/husband to be with someone else. let alone a dbz character. can you imagine someone in that world , being ok with it. or even our world plz don't do that to dragon ball z

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

it's dragon Ball but it's super cringe at times and gives me neckbeard vibes especially the part where he made everyone ware suites and fedoras, that made me have to drop it.

It's bad, in writing quality, story development, character design, the updating stability is pretty good, and the world background is basically dragonball.

was excited for this but honestly the mcs personality is just plain annoying, i couldn't handle it at all. the story had a nice theme, Goku being a gamer but honestly the author kind of ruins it with how he writes the characters

Harem really ruins it Im currently sick so i cant be bothered to explain better

overall the story I want but it was done very poorly. qualiy was ok but it just the spacing and formatting just destroyed it for me it didn't make sense and difficult to diciper what the author meant. the story moves very quickly tooo quickly litteraly in the first few paragraphs the MC already met the god got all there powers and was sent to the other world not even any explanation on who the character was just the MC was there and that's it.updating is ok it's frequent enough that its better than like half of everyone else. no character design just "this is MC and he is wearing a shirt" next scene....this is litteraly how it is

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this is my honest and biased review because of the author disguising his ff with wrong tags. to be honest this is very good story. some moments seem forced so yeah only two complains.