Review Detail of ric3cak3 in Vampire's Obsession

Item: Vampire's Obsession
Rating: 4.8

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ric3cak3Lv12yrric3cak3

Twilight meets Beauty and the Beast! Love Elsa already and I'm barely ten chapters in. Her pure innocence is honestly so refreshing! I can't wait to see how her personality contrasts with our MC. A small complaint is that there are a few grammatical errors, but it doesn't ruin the overall reading experience. Honestly, I'd say it doesn't even matter, especially when the plotline is so interesting. Great work author!!

Vampire's Obsession

Pixiepiu

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ric3cak3Lv1ric3cak3

I pointed out a few things that could be changed in the first ch. I suggest you download grammarly and add it as an extension to your chrome browser. That's what helped me proofread my work faster.

Pixiepiu:Thank you for the review. If you do not have any problem then you can point out some grammatical errors in this one to ten chapters. It will help me a lot.

2yr

PixiepiuAuthorPixiepiu

Thank you for the review. If you do not have any problem then you can point out some grammatical errors in this one to ten chapters. It will help me a lot.

2yr

ric3cak3Lv1ric3cak3

of course!! I'll be taking some time with it though :")

Pixiepiu:Thank you for the review. If you do not have any problem then you can point out some grammatical errors in this one to ten chapters. It will help me a lot.

2yr