Review Detail of Talleyrand in Invincible's Kryptonian Twin
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Usually I am rather hard in criticism but there I do not understand those who are. The story is pretty well put together even though it started a little fast at the beginning. Although it doesn't affect the canon at the beginning, the changes it brings little by little are quite coherent (mark's jealousy, the kryptonian in this universe...) Even the love interest was brought with a good explanation.
Invincible's Kryptonian Twin
Enigma_Green
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hey I like to remind you that as a fic you have all right to AU the story because from the moment mc is born you'll have a butterfly effect you can use the plot as guide lines but don't follow it completely people read fics because they usually want something more from the story so you can like change up love interest of some people and change someone fate for example like if they should die or if they are younger in the original you could make them live or be older don't let the hate get you down most people on this app/site are toxic ik I'm one at times
Enigma_Green:I cried a little as I read this. thank you sir!