Talleyrand
Harems are disgusting !đ€ź When the google translator return to the site?
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In itself it's a good story, but the problem is that it's ultra repetitive. I'm on Chapter 482 and I've read the same arc sequence 3 and a half times. An auction, a random one that provokes them and then ends up dying 20 chapters later, and a tide of beasts. Interspersed with artifact and/or overpowered pill fabrications. And of course never a betrayal, a setback or even the slightest development for the MC and his wife. Wife who is supposed to be as strong as him except that we never see him since she is a flower pot most of the time. So if you want to read it, don't read almost 500 chapters in 2 days at the risk of being disgusted and not read it again for probably 6 months.
like this : Testing the patience of Doom is to be unwise
Doom doesn't say I he say doom
By the way now that I think about it it would really be a huge storyline error if you introduced magic now. Your MC lived 4500 years, traveled every corner of this planet and met countless people. NEVER ONCE has he come into contact with magic in any form. But one day like that out of nowhere a magician attacks him. No, it's completely incoherent and stupid. In addition, you clearly pointed out in the first chapter that he was only an immortal human, stronger and faster than a vampire. If you want to make him special so much, keep going, make him progressively stronger and faster like an original in The Vampire Diaries
By the way now that I think about it it would really be a huge storyline error if you introduced magic now. Your MC lived 4500 years, traveled every corner of this planet and met countless people. NEVER ONCE has he come into contact with magic in any form. But one day like that out of nowhere a magician attacks him. No, it's completely incoherent and stupid. In addition, you clearly pointed out in the first chapter that he was only an immortal human, stronger and faster than a vampire. If you want to make him special so much, keep going, make him progressively stronger and faster like an original in The Vampire Diaries
no magic, no need to distort the original work to this extent. They're werewolves and shapeshifters. Use this. At worst the guy on fire turns into a vampire schizophrenic gifted with pryokinesis
according to jkr hagrid's wand measured 40 cm
the fact that they say the names of the techniques is only for the reader/viewer. They're not idiots shouting their next move
the fact that they say the names of the techniques is only for the reader/viewer. They're not idiots shouting their next move
Did they master full breath in one day? Without intensive near-lethal training? Hello plot holes, you weren't very far after all