Hmm... this is quite the read. will definitely read it till the end. The plot is intriguing enough, and so are the characters. I'm not particularly a big fan of the overly casual writing at times, and some phrases and sentences needs a rewrite. I'd like to see a deeper side to the characters and just overall improvement to the quality... basically, I'm saying I want more lol. Anyways, good read.
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