Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Devil's Collar

This story is really mature, yikes. I wasn't ready for that. But all in all, it's definitely an interesting concept. Not my favorite tone and not the kind of story I would generally read to be honest. Stability of updates seems to be solid, world development is good, but character design could use some work imo. I feel like the characters are just doing what they are doing and we aren't getting to know them enough as individuals. But I encourage this author as well as any others to keep writing and pursuing their dreams. We all get better with time and experience but the story is definitely interesting. Writing quality is good overall, but I did notice a few minor errors.