Review Detail of Clone_v2 in Devil's Collar

What can I say about Devil's Collar? Well, I'll start with this. If you're under the age of 18, you shouldn't be reading it. No way, no how should you get past even the first chapter. This is not a story for children. It's not a story for prudes either, so consider your own boundaries in regards to sexual content before reading this webnovel. With that disclaimer dispensed with, let me start with the good. Devil's Collar is followers the adventure of a man done wrong. Humiliated by his wife and the man he respected most in the world and made to believe that his children weren't is, the story begins with Prakash (Herefor known as the MC) committing suicide. Upon death, he's brought before who I can only assume is some form of demon and given the opportunity for revenge and reincarnation. Accepting the offer, if a little reluctantly, he is reincarnated into a world of cultivation, but there's an issue. He can't cultivate. At least he wouldn't be able to cultivate without the assistance of his obligatory cheat, the devil's collar. A sentient device that allows the MC to siphon ki from other characters. The only issue being... Well, he has to f**k them first. That's the world of Devil's Collar, and I think you'll know instinctively if that world's for you. The love scenes are not shied away from. They're detailed and expanded on. No euphemisms are employed in these scenes, even when you really think they ought to be. It's quite possible the detailed, um... shall we say, passion? Sure. It's quite possible that the detailed passion may come off as somewhat gratuitous, but that's a question for your own sensibilities. What isn't in question is that the world we're placed in shows a lot of potential for a thrilling, and at times, saucy, experience. Now, while the writing is rather good. It's clear, simple, and it's easy to understand what's happening at any given time; it's not without its flaws. The most noticeable of which being that the author will often slip from the past tense, in which most of the story is told, into the present tense. These tense shifts are quite jarring to deal with as they break up the flow of the prose. Another thing I found jarring is that in chapter three, when the author writes the exposition for the MC's inherited life, he breaks the fourth wall, and therefore, my immersion from the story. It only happened once in the eight chapters that are currently available, but it is something the author should be aware of to fix so that he can improve on this work. With that said, do I think you should read Devil's Collar? Well, if my previous disclaimer is noted and not a problem for you, then Devil's Collar is the well-written adventure, with no shortage of naughtiness, for you