well I'm kinda shameless so I'm gonna rate my work 5 stars it's normal................................................................................................................

Sigh... I just finish this story..... This has a very good idea, I like Minecraft and the mod... But too bad that that.... Sigh... I can't be harsh to people... So all I can say that is, good luck author... Do more paragraph, do the symbol properly, dialogue should be separate, less nonsense monologue, and a few more...

I mean it is what it is. .

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the story is bland and monotonous, there are errors in both plot and grammar, the author makes the world seem monotonous with hardly any interaction, mc is like a doll with no interactions or anything, the story is too fast and you don't see any character growth, no changes made beautiful world of MHA with his presence, the story goes with the turbo and most of the fights and scenes are skipped and there is a very short description on the things that happen, the author seems more write for the word count without paying attention to the story

I really like the premise but it feels like its missing more like u could explain the mods in a story how he got the items and i feel its sometimes difficult to read some parts. You could also expand on the mha universe a little it feels like ur missing alot and just skimming the story. but i really like it u should keep it up and improve. a little long.