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2021-08-27 12:42

I really like the premise but it feels like its missing more like u could explain the mods in a story how he got the items and i feel its sometimes difficult to read some parts. You could also expand on the mha universe a little it feels like ur missing alot and just skimming the story. but i really like it u should keep it up and improve. a little long.

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