Review Detail of Notorious_doc in Morna goddess of death

Shameless author here, please give my work a chance for following reasons- 1) Mix mythology from Greek + Indian gods.We serve all range of gods from Indra, to Yama to Athena and Demorna. 2) Not just a typical villain story with stupid stepping stone villains in fact they are used in just first and last chapter no stupid rubbish in between. 3) This is all about how Powerful Morna is who turned from mortal to immortal and how wife loving Overlord is. 4)No cheats used if they possess power is either they are god ( i.e. born with it) or earned with hard work. 5) Complex god emotions used. PS - If you read it previously please leave comment for further improvement to be made and use your precious votes to move it forward