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- Notorious_doc1yrReplied to DaoistShogun
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I have nearly finished 200 chapters and I am soooooo disappointed and dissatisfied with this book ..At first it was like something new but now it's same repetitive stuff over and over again. They just change the setting around it. It starts like this he go to new study some dumb ( have nothing better to do in their life) people push his buttons either Eve teasing some woman with him or Considering him some weak guy and later he defeats them with no effort whatsoever. It's like he clears step 100 and the person competing with him is on step 70 or something . Other thing they compare him to God Buddha but I am sure those great Immortals never considered humans as ant like being unless it affects his profit or gain .It's like " I the best " ( Hindi Bollywood song from the movie ( phir bhi dil hai hindustani) is on repeat in his mind. You should be thankful for getting a chance to reborn and thats your cheat otherwise you are nothing but failure.
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how is beady eyes sign of dominating personality ..For me beady eyes are for perverts and addicts
They possessed such overwhelming and over the top manner that they out right scared many people in the mansion. A pin drop silence fell over the entire estate as no one dared to speak a word. Since the Jin City was not part of Jiang Bei region, not a lot of people in the estate knew Zhou Tianhao or Baldy Liu. However, their greasy pudgy faces and dangerous looking beady eyes were tell tale signs of their dominating positions in Jaing Bei. - Notorious_doc1yrCommented
swallow the sun...I think someone stole the idea from Hindu god Hanuman Ji as he really swallowed the sun thinking it was ripe mango when he was just a baby..
He was not lying. The perfected immortals who had reached the Dao Reunion could catch the moon and steal the stars or outright swallow the sun. The cultivators who reached Tribulation Transcendence possessed even more terrifying power than that of Dao Reunion. To them, the stars were nothing but marbles in their pocket. - Notorious_doc1yrPosted
I was impressed at first by FL without any system or supernatural help she knew how to survive and not bow down easily..but after the sh*t that was spread with the entry of ex fiance it became the same garbage that I was running away from. Why destroy the good plotline just to bring extra "umph" factor to the story.I hate it when fl and ml get disturbances or turmoil in their internal equation. I love the storm that shake the ship but not the one that sink/drown and crash it for all eternity. Sometimes too much extra salt destroys a perfectly fine dish .Hence this book is dropped.
- Notorious_doc2yrReplied to Renee_Orona_Cook
I agree 👍
For lunch, he made safe choices like barbequed chicken and duck chops with noodles. On the other hand, his baby girl was more…er, adventurous. Skewered scorpions, black spiders, water beetles, and silkworm chrysalis were on her paper plate alongside the more palatable fried rice and calamari. - Notorious_doc2yrReplied to Dragon_God123
- Notorious_doc2yrPosted
Shameless author here, please give my work a chance for following reasons- 1) Mix mythology from Greek + Indian gods.We serve all range of gods from Indra, to Yama to Athena and Demorna. 2) Not just a typical villain story with stupid stepping stone villains in fact they are used in just first and last chapter no stupid rubbish in between. 3) This is all about how Powerful Morna is who turned from mortal to immortal and how wife loving Overlord is. 4)No cheats used if they possess power is either they are god ( i.e. born with it) or earned with hard work. 5) Complex god emotions used. PS - If you read it previously please leave comment for further improvement to be made and use your precious votes to move it forward
- Notorious_doc2yrCommented
I can feel nausea building all because of this selfish,gutless man
Mu Qing sighed. "Mu Chen, I've buried this matter in the depths of my heart for so many years that they've grown as heavy as a mountain. I had no one to talk to, and no one would understand. I truly didn't expect Liang Zhen to be so ruthless; she used her death to nail all of us to the pillar of shame. In the end, Liang Zhou also lost her child… Following that, things escalated to where it is now…" - Notorious_doc2yrCommented
what a poor excuse of a man...each and every person face difficulty irrespective of their gender and, thus this provide us reason to be disloyal to the ones who stood by us through thick and thin...sadly some people use this conveniently...I think everything think was fed to Mu Qing in silver platter and he lacked the thrill of chasing and he selfishly disregarded everything that was true in his life for some fake glitter..sorry for my blabbering
But, Mu Chen, you are also an adult man. You know, in our lives, we will encounter a lot of temptations. We will also be tired, and we will also be distracted. You and Song Ning are newly married, so naturally, you won't be able to understand what I'm saying. Wait until your child is born, and your life is in pieces… At that time, you'll be able to understand my feelings..." - Notorious_doc2yrReplied to OldManMarcus
who wouldn't like a person like me...don't miss me too much..🤣🤣...jokes aside thanx for giving such a sweet reply
He looked at her and a smile appeared on his face. "I know. Who wouldn't like a person like me? Don't miss me too much." - Notorious_doc2yrCommented
ohh vampires are mostly vegetarian too they just drink a bit of blood..
This pot of Mao Xue Wang was mostly vegetarian! - Notorious_doc2yrReplied to Ronee
moondance with me baby ( in your bathrobe, with open V shape neck )
Ye Qingran said, "Is that so? But the feeling you give me really makes me want to protect you." - Notorious_doc2yrCommented
and that's the motive my friend
Of course, she could also use the tutoring time to deepen her relationship with Brother Ran. - Notorious_doc2yrCommented
I don't feel right the way he is reprimanding her..is he the principal or our ancestor from the time of stone age..his thoughts reflects decay because of not being used for the long time
Then, she said to Si Jing, "I must say, you're a girl, so don't accuse others of raping you. If the raping scandal gets blown up, the one with the bad reputation won't be the boy. You don't want to be criticized by others whenever you go there in the future. People might say, 'Oh, it's her. She's the woman who was raped.' So, don't go and seek justice for others when it's none of your business. You don't know if you were really seeking justice or if you were just being used as a chess piece. If you're really bored, you can go study." - Notorious_doc2yrCommented
Creepy pervert..
The wardens didn't bother to hold back and stared at the view of naked women. If it wasn't because of the rule that came to not lay a hand on virgin, he wouldn't have bothered to restrain himself and bed them to cover his lust. Licking his lips in his mind the man was assaulting them as he like.