there is not much to complain about with the story but Author-san if you would like this novel to be enjoyed by more people PLEASE fix the grammar, it has been quite terrible lately, just fixing the basic 'him her she I me we his hers' would make the story so much better and alot more comprehensive.

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mc is just stupid nobody like you and you want to help your sister I dont care what you do but he just keeps interfering in other people's business it Is very annoying to say the least

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It's grammar is so bad that it is so annoying to read, stop adding the fricking enguado or what ever, because it is ver distracting, and makes is harding to read. So in conclusion, STOP ADDING HIS F**KING NAME ALMOST AFTER ALL HIS LINES, IT'S STUPID.

The interaction with the mc and god is just to stupid and poorly executed. makes me not want to read it.

Everything this novel tries to do, it does terribly. The main character is, in theory, overpowered. I say in theory because the main character doesn’t actually use this power in any interesting way. He makes a few skills for himself and he kills some bandits prettt easily, thats it. Reminder, the main character has the ability to create any skill or structure with no setback and these two abilities are only the tip of the iceberg. The mc could at least tip some of the struggling workers some white gold but he doesn’t even do that. The world building is poor. We know very little about the world and what we do know shows very little imagination. The world building revolves around the “Demi-humans” and the humans and demons. That’s it. The characters have no discernible traits. The main character has some personality but no goals, hardships, nor relatable feelings. The girlfriends have no special trait, even though he could give each of them a class set of skills, making them deities. The family has the best personality. There is no plot. The worst part of the novel is that their, literally, is no plot. The main character has no goals, doesn’t want to learn about the world, doesn’t want rule it, and overall doesnt want to make a mark. Maybe this changes after chapter 41 but considering he just picked up another damsel in distress, I have no interest in paying coins for the following chapters. Overall, dont waste your time reading this novel, “Tribe 10,000x amplification” and “ten consecutive draws to invincibility” both feature op mc and a written well(with an actual plot).

Don't bother wasting your time reading this unless you like screaming at the MC for being a dumb idiot. Story feels too robotic and weird tbh.

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good story. the only complaint i have is the grammer. kind of hard to tell what is being said and what is the char thinking. and some weird termenology being used. example: the word taste makes an aperiance once in a while withe no contex really confusing