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DaoistdonYKt
DaoistdonYKtLv11yr
2023-10-22 22:06

история ужэ год без обновлений ничего сказать 1 бал большэ поставить не могу птица обломинго не позволяет читаешь читаешь и облом продолжэния

Reincarnated into Naruto with breathing techniques.

patinhoDEUSVULT
4.1
51 Chs

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IzanagiBR
IzanagiBRLv1

Yuri?Yuri?Yuri?Yuri?Yuri?Yuri?Yuri?Yuri?Yuri?Yuri?Yuri?Yuri?Yuri?Yuri? Pls noo!Pls noo!Pls noo!Pls noo!Pls noo!Pls noo!Pls noo!Pls noo!Pls noo!

3yr

BeautifulBastard
BeautifulBastardLv4

no being able to use ninjutsu ,genjutsu and fuuinjutsu is alread stupid but taijutsu realy? theres some grammar errors and overall is not so bad but i didn't like

3yr
WoofWoof
WoofWoofLv6

meh the words are confusing. offer her sword horisontally and strike?? Surprise! it's a surprise attack against the WATER!!!

3yr
HotWetDream
HotWetDreamLv14

writing quality 4* as there are some grammatical mistake such as her, his, she, he. idk how often this updates so i hope author wont drop this and keep making chapter even if it have to be a chapter a week... im sure this can be popular, :)

3yr
Orange_Ghost
Orange_GhostLv14

Try to read this story and it's great. BUT I hesitate to read this story further as author sure had no commitment to complete the story just like his/her other work which seems to be hiatus or drop??.Nevertheless,this story pretty much enjoyable.

3yr
ForgeCoffee
ForgeCoffeeLv14

There are a lot of problems. 1. Grammar mistakes, while I don't really mind them, having a lot of them really disrupts the flow of reading. Especially when the POV keeps changing. 2. Unable to use taijutsu. I mean, seriously? Taijutsu is literally just punching, what next? Can't walk without performing a breathing technique? 3. A normal girl in her past life and has managed to sense chakra already, even when she's only days old. Chakra = Physical + Spirit. Let's say you have a lot of spiritual energy in you, but your physical energy is lacking, so the mc being able to sense it is nonsensical. 4. The Mc and Author might be on "cra*k", hence the Mc's Chakra is called Crakra Overall? It had a solid foundation, but was terribly added upon. Child of Uchiha, but can't use GENJUTSU, THE THING THAT THE UCHIHAS ARE KNOWN FOR. And why does the Mc want to be a Shinobi when you cant use taijutsu? An enemy could literally just steal your sword then what? You can only run around evading cause you can't punch nor kick.

2yr
Rafael_Suassuna
Rafael_SuassunaLv1

MOREEEE!!!!

4mth
Daoist9zTScb
Daoist9zTScbLv4

Noooo!!! When will be the next update I can't wait for moore please author continue this story

5mth
BDexe
BDexeLv13

Biggest issue with it is the awful writing and grammar making it hard to follow the story as it jumps about or is plain unreadable due to the grammar and sentence structure being a chaotic mess.

11mth
BattelC
BattelCLv4

give me more!!!!! SPAM KFKFKXKXXKNXKXKXKXKXKXXX C X C VC C CCLCKCKCKCKCLC CKCKCKCLCKLCLCLCLCLCLCLC KGICO OGOGOGOGOGOOGOG FLFKFKKXKXKXXD

2yr
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