There are a lot of problems. 1. Grammar mistakes, while I don't really mind them, having a lot of them really disrupts the flow of reading. Especially when the POV keeps changing. 2. Unable to use taijutsu. I mean, seriously? Taijutsu is literally just punching, what next? Can't walk without performing a breathing technique? 3. A normal girl in her past life and has managed to sense chakra already, even when she's only days old. Chakra = Physical + Spirit. Let's say you have a lot of spiritual energy in you, but your physical energy is lacking, so the mc being able to sense it is nonsensical. 4. The Mc and Author might be on "cra*k", hence the Mc's Chakra is called Crakra Overall? It had a solid foundation, but was terribly added upon. Child of Uchiha, but can't use GENJUTSU, THE THING THAT THE UCHIHAS ARE KNOWN FOR. And why does the Mc want to be a Shinobi when you cant use taijutsu? An enemy could literally just steal your sword then what? You can only run around evading cause you can't punch nor kick.
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