Item: Reincarnated into Naruto with breathing techniques.
Rating: 1.8
Author: DaoistXbsAIc

DaoistXbsAIcLv12yr

2022-06-23 23:17

The novel was nice to read at first. Despite some few grammatical errors, the plot was quite creative and fun to read. However the mc is too OP so it kinda ruins it for me. She got strong TOO FAST. I mean like she basically can destroy Kaguya Otsutsuki already when Madara wasn't even revived yet. That's all.

Reincarnated into Naruto with breathing techniques.

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