Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

(1-24)Speech and character interactions reads like a Chat Log. Not for me. I think it's a personal issue for me. It feels like the writer can't be bothered to fully flesh out speech and character interactions, so in return I can't be bothered to read the story.

I give writing quality 3 stars because the way you set up the dialogue is not great, with names and dashes it's not right, I suggest gaining experience by reading other fanfics and see how they set up the dialogue so you can improve everything else is okay though

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Just like 95% percent of Uchiha mc's, he is Itachi's and Sasuke's brother. Pretty cliche. As old as the rookie nine. So far, stories where the protagonist is as old as the main cast, are bland with a few exceptions. Like, Game of shadow of shadows. The best one so far. Long story short, it would have been better for the mc to be born earlier and escape the village. An Uchiha joins another village, whether it's a great village or a small one. Doesn't matter. Would've been nice to read.

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Great story so far really look forward to Rai meeting Itachi again when Itachi visits Konoha . The MC is great Rai is a very likeable dude so far . Really gonns look forward to how Rai being in the canon changes stuff . I don't really like the MC x Karin ship so far but I would trust in the authors judgement for now and see where it goes . There are few stuff I would like if you can do going forward such as Rai promoting to Chunin or Jonin by the end of the Chunin Exams I think it should happen because Rai as far as they are concerned is a prodigy that surpasses both Itachi and Minato so they should see his potential and promote him to Jonin or Hokage's Anbu unit as Itachi became a Anbu really young , I would want him to do solo missions moving forward rather than joining another team as he lost his team and I am looking forward to see Rai's Susaano . Really love this story Author San . Looking forward to the next chapters

It"s not that bad it need's more updates ............................................................................................................

Terrible novel due to 1 guaranteed author will drop 2 gamer mind removes immersion for readers 3 inventory infinite space idiotic writing Dropped when I read the third one