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Review Detail of Uragos in Cycle Of Nirvana

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Uragos
UragosAuthor2yrUragos

As the first novel I wrote, it will always have a special place in my heart. If you want to travel in a world full of mystery, action, war and development with a leading role that you will love and adopt, you are in the right place.

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Cycle Of Nirvana

Uragos

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Uragos
UragosAuthorUragos

I took it out after a while. Thank you for your critique. I think I need things like this.

LORDOFORIGINALINK:Can u take out the last names in every sentence
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15Dreamstrafe

señor, please get an editor.. from the synopsis alone, your grammar sucks

Uragos
UragosAuthorUragos

Thank you for your comment. I am aware that I am bad as a grammer. My mother tongue is not English so I have difficulties in some places. I am trying to improve myself. I hope you don't have the same troubles as you did in the synopsis while reading the story.

Dreamstrafe:señor, please get an editor.. from the synopsis alone, your grammar sucks
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15Dreamstrafe

thanks for the reply! also, you've come a long way in learning English, I admire you!

Uragos:Thank you for your comment. I am aware that I am bad as a grammer. My mother tongue is not English so I have difficulties in some places. I am trying to improve myself. I hope you don't have the same troubles as you did in the synopsis while reading the story.
Matt_pike
Matt_pikeLv5Matt_pike

Any romance?

Dieudonner_17
Dieudonner_17Lv5Dieudonner_17

Actually the english gets better

LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKLv11LORDOFORIGINALINK

Can u take out the last names in every sentence

LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKLv11LORDOFORIGINALINK

Just downloaded The app Grammarly It will help u

Uragos:Thank you for your comment. I am aware that I am bad as a grammer. My mother tongue is not English so I have difficulties in some places. I am trying to improve myself. I hope you don't have the same troubles as you did in the synopsis while reading the story.
Niks161
Niks161Lv2Niks161

this is not harem right?