The story is decent but the terrible grammar just takes away everything it had to offer. Even basic things like names are forgotten from one sentence to the other, almost no sentence is grammatically correct. It's insane how people give this story 4+ stars for writing quality... I have the feeling, that the author doesn't want to edit his chapters or he doesn't realise, that this looks like a soup of letters.
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