sounds like bs tbh
kill him on the spot. he could kill the entire party if they were to be fooled by him
it feels like he is only following already existing paths and not his own.
especially if u don't pass down knowledge
what is this interaction??????
broke up with him? what? they never had a relationship to begin with
Literally no interaction between him and his master. not once has she asked about his feys or if he has encountered any problems etc. And he has never asked for any tips etc. This entire master-disciple relationship that the author tries to build is purely superficial with no depth to it. They only interact when he is about to die or when he needs materials.
its 'making a decision'
but why is he so stupid? its highly immature to act like our mc did
but your an idiot, a father of such a child wouldn't be calm etc
the mc is legit braindead and has to many mental problems to even list them all. its incredibly annoying to read that there is no character growth, no its like he developing back and starts to be even more delusional then before. half of the bock is the author making fun of his mc and the mc making fun of himself
inspiring? you're truly lacking IQ
why would he buy the skills he has again?
thank you for the outline, without it I would've started the story. The first paragraph sounds like a terrible MC and highly annoying characters.