Review Detail of Bartothegreat in Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]

So my first impressions of this novel were actually pretty bad. Aside from the fact that it all reads like a first draft with zero editing, I was expecting an immensely cliche power fantasy. But, I will admit, the story has grown on me, and has actually surpassed my expectations. I've read all the way to the current chapter, 316, and am sad to be caught up, I was enjoying the binge read. A big reason why I am liking the story so far is it's somewhat slow paced. While the MC does belong to the OP category, the plot has made it so you really don't see that. He actually spends half the time struggling because he gets involved with things way above his level. Trust me, when I say the story just keeps getting better, and you get more invested in the characters as the story goes on. I strongly hope and advise the author keep putting in the effort to add more depth to the story, and especially characters. And certainly do not neglect the romance element. It has actually turned out very wholesome and I really like the few female lead characters introduced so far. Just avoid the terrible pitfall where they become damsels in distress who exist to rely on the MC and show no personality. That would be a disgrace to your writing.