Review Detail of Stylish_Demon in Rebirth: Over the Horizon
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As this is the Tenth review, I have decided to review this. First, this was something I just wrote on a strike but, later it really developed into a good novel. 80 chapters have been uploaded at this time, and with 82 loyal fans, I got a lot of clearance in building the future chapters. Thank you. Any new readers just read the first 5 chapters, and you can really rate my novel with that.
Rebirth: Over the Horizon
Stylish_Demon
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author, can you you explain why it not harem it will more enjoyable etc, to add anthor girl. for explain part I meant if by adding harem does it ruins your plot or its you don't like it or you add later on, it shame man, it has huge or highest potential to become wonderful harem like wife mc potentially help the mc or supports him etc, plus I haven't read novel has same potential as yours, it feels like harem meant or sync with novel or you could say you can easily add harem without harming the plots rather it harming it you could add as plot armour where mc wife saves him at critical situation, I haven't seen or read novel where mc wife impacts plots like helping etc. you don't have to take my advice on this novel, but you could potential use these ideas when making harem novel. I believe you have potential in romance, harem etc department. I will be waiting for when you release harem novel. author can you release more chapter đ
Stylish_Demon:No
Thank you, actually this is the first time someone gives me a detailed comment like you. I didn't set this as a harem because first, it was an urban novel. I truly hate to see a man having more girls in a modern time. As for a harem novel, I am currently writing one, name: 'I just want to live lazily' or you can just click on my profile.
MrNightmare:author, can you you explain why it not harem it will more enjoyable etc, to add anthor girl. for explain part I meant if by adding harem does it ruins your plot or its you don't like it or you add later on, it shame man, it has huge or highest potential to become wonderful harem like wife mc potentially help the mc or supports him etc, plus I haven't read novel has same potential as yours, it feels like harem meant or sync with novel or you could say you can easily add harem without harming the plots rather it harming it you could add as plot armour where mc wife saves him at critical situation, I haven't seen or read novel where mc wife impacts plots like helping etc. you don't have to take my advice on this novel, but you could potential use these ideas when making harem novel. I believe you have potential in romance, harem etc department. I will be waiting for when you release harem novel. author can you release more chapter đ
It wouldnât be more enjoyable in my opinion. Itâs a Morden novel I think harems are weird in this case. Harems majority of the time ruin the novel. And yes thereâs been plenty novels where the mc wifeâs plays a large role or helps the mc. Where in most harems lots of girls get forgotten about or are just useless and need to get saved. I donât think this novel has the potential for a harem
MrNightmare:author, can you you explain why it not harem it will more enjoyable etc, to add anthor girl. for explain part I meant if by adding harem does it ruins your plot or its you don't like it or you add later on, it shame man, it has huge or highest potential to become wonderful harem like wife mc potentially help the mc or supports him etc, plus I haven't read novel has same potential as yours, it feels like harem meant or sync with novel or you could say you can easily add harem without harming the plots rather it harming it you could add as plot armour where mc wife saves him at critical situation, I haven't seen or read novel where mc wife impacts plots like helping etc. you don't have to take my advice on this novel, but you could potential use these ideas when making harem novel. I believe you have potential in romance, harem etc department. I will be waiting for when you release harem novel. author can you release more chapter đ
ChaosAsura0:It wouldnât be more enjoyable in my opinion. Itâs a Morden novel I think harems are weird in this case. Harems majority of the time ruin the novel. And yes thereâs been plenty novels where the mc wifeâs plays a large role or helps the mc. Where in most harems lots of girls get forgotten about or are just useless and need to get saved. I donât think this novel has the potential for a harem
