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IronM
IronMLv42yr
2022-06-15 13:50

the story is common in a lot of Chinese novel, go back in time-> use knowledge to make big money and an head start+ op grow gear (maybe). an big bad event is gonna happened and need to get ready for that and that's about it. this is a fine story but an big problem that some story have and a lot of people don't like this. and that is by making other people(side character) weak to make the main character strong, For Example: MC spent hours trying to mastery the spear, but somehow he still got first boss kill and first dungeon, even in todays gaming world, people that rush or try rushing past the mobs/group of people at the start of an new game is very common, and they are hardcore players. so the facts that MC still get first kill bonus. is pushing the plot a bit too much. like the first boss kill can happened in like the first 10 hours of the game. base on how long MC took to level.

Rebirth: Over the Horizon

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Taoist_Azure_Sword
Taoist_Azure_SwordLv4

This book is unique , it's different from other MMORPG books I've ever read . The descriptions are detailed and vivid . The MC is interesting , and I also like the story development . It's surely a recommended book.

3yr

Jynxieee
JynxieeeLv3

Is this a novel where they actually go to the part where the game merges with real life Cause most stories just have them playing the video game for almost the whole story

3yr
Yolo_Natss
Yolo_NatssLv12

Such a shame, the story got me really hooked but the writing quality makes it a headache to read and understand. Fast passed, the story is going fast, random things happens when there is already something going on. Characters interactions could be more deep and meaningful, tbh I didn’t feel that much emotions and thoughts behind the conversations. Also I don’t quite yet understand the MC on a deeper level, he just does stuffs.

3yr
Tyson_1102
Tyson_1102Lv14

So the story is pretty good so far while I’m at chapter 55. The pacing is nice, the skills seem interesting, and it looks like there is a lot of potential for world building. That being said, it seems to be heading in a direction that makes me feel like I might drop it soon sadly. I’ll list the pros and cons below Pros: -Good pacing -Cool abilities -OP protagonist, if you’re into that -Only about 120~ chapters are in VR, then it goes to real-world (from what I have seen) -Interesting power system of gods and blessings Cons: -Grammar is fine most of the time, weird at other times, and occasionally requires you to read something a few times to understand -A few plot holes -Some illogical power scaling - the Romance (this is making me think about dropping) This will be more detailed as it’s my biggest issue so far. So far, the female lead serve to do 3 things: blush when the MC says something, stutter when interacting with the MC, and receive things from the MC…im not exaggerating. Her unique class, her equipment, her summons, her spells, all from the MC. She is useless 99+% of the time and it’s to the point where the main female side character, who hasn’t gotten as much screen time, is more persuasive as a love interest (no harem confirmed so all hope is lost 😂). To top it off, the MC changes his whole personality when he is with her. About 18 of the 55 chapters I’ve read so far has been centered around them together so there is that… I’ll try some more chapters but it’s not looking good. The worst part is, I feel this behavoiur will get worse when it switches from VR to real life. TLDR: Pretty decent so far, not too many errors but they are apparent, the romance is ruining the story and unless something changes, I’ll probably drop.

2yr
HitThat007
HitThat007Lv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
8urnuls
8urnulsLv14

I definitely recommend this book it's a fun read. However, honestly I'm kinda annoyed that the author had the gall to say/ask for readers not to complain about the writing quality but instead point the mistakes out, and here the readers are pointing them out but even after a month or more few to none were addressed or fixed. IDK maybe it's just some that have slipped through the cracks but either way as a reader its kinda annoying.

2yr
4Lords_Ace
4Lords_AceLv3

................................................................ ....................I like this story.................... ................................................................

3yr
Iron_guy
Iron_guyLv2

Author-san the novel synopsis is somewhat, complicated... but it is mostly like Video games novel, so for now I will follow this novel. Waiting for more chapters...

3yr
InSein
InSeinLv10

"NO HAREM TAG" = RARE, AMAZING, EXCEPTIONAL NOVEL PLOT WITHOUT BRAIN DEAD AND USELESS A.K.A GOOD FOR NOTHING WOMAN IN MC'S LIFE. HOOOORAAAAAAYY!!!

2yr
Kinha_MTG
Kinha_MTGLv2

so in summary, grammar= 1/5 everything else= 5/5 The story is wonderful, the characters have depth. the grammar is a godless afront to mother nature

3yr
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