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Review Detail of Darine_ALRAMMAH in Unrivaled Under The Heaven

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Darine_ALRAMMAHLv12yrDarine_ALRAMMAH

I am actually really impressed by this story. Your style inspires me actually even though it is kinda hard hard writing in the tense you use, but you managed to nail that so points for that. There is a few grammatical errors, but only picky people would comment on that since your style and events cover all that ish up. Keep going, I love this, and you a great author! Also I am waiting for more to come!!

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thanks

Olympu
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I disagree. It is not hard writing in the third person, and it doesn't cover the grammar mistakes. At the same time, it's basically like every other novel here. It is not a piece of gold but needs improvement. That is my critique.