Review Detail of JoseDavid07_11 in Pokémon: Dragon Master's Tale (original)

The story is yes, it is not bad, it is just that there is no real development, personality, interaction with other characters, it must detail and deepen more in its journey, coexistence with Pokémon or battles, you could even put other points of view, etc. is that the story seems more like a summary in which they talk about where Mc is going and what he does and there is no real development in the story, although it is not all bad and has a good idea, it is not well managed and could to get better, Anyway, good luck! :)