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Darine_ALRAMMAH
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2021-09-21 02:39

This story exceeded my expectations! First the title is a total eye catcher. Second, the way you write gives me goose bumps. There are some mistakes, but your style cover them up. Added to library and waiting for you to upload more!

The Queen Of Shadows

dinoriii
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21 Chs

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Adwaid_Nambiar
Adwaid_NambiarLv1

I feel the cover of this book does a really big disservice to the content in the book. I thought it was a romance novel mostly based on Victorian era due to it and as I started reading I found that it was not the case and I am sooooo glad about it!! I really liked the introductory chapter, it does a good job of setting up the story and I really liked the way it's written. I didn't really find anything to criticize about, and that's a great thing. I really liked the dialogues and characters. I will be waiting on the upcoming chapters :)

3yr

pblazarus
pblazarusLv1

Given that some romance novels on this site can be bland and a little unrealistic, this novel is actually quite refreshing! It's clear the author knows where they want to take the story and I'm excited to see how it all evovles! Definitely give it a try!

3yr
Luzparadise_
Luzparadise_Lv1

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02Lv11

This book is quite interesting if you're into vampires and werewolves. Review Proper after reading the latest chapter 8 release... Writing Quality. The narratives are easy to read and fun. Though, I advise that you could use some more proofreading of your work to make it better. Stability of Updates. Just take your time honing this. Quality over quantity. Story Development. It's pretty well. As you continue to read, there are more interesting you get to learn in the story. Vampires, Werewolves, magic, academy and so much more. Character Design. I enjoy Vivian's persona but sometimes though maybe it's just me. Sometimes I felt her attitude was quite unnatural towards Gavin. Or maybe it's just her thing to get to act close with people because of her carefree nature? Oh, but I love the mysterious air surrounding her. And the puppy too! Well, this is just still starting and everything can still be developed and fleshed out. World Background. Well, actually I thought this would be an old era setup, but I'm surprised to see that is in the modern day. So much to explore and fleshed out more. Overall, this story has lots of potentials. With more development, this story can give us greater experiences 🙏🥰😌

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_Meggie_
_Meggie_Lv1

I didn't get to read as much as I wanted to, but I will definitely be back to read some more! So far this book is really good! there characters are really well written with funny and relatable personalities! And the magic in the world is really intriguing! I can't wait to read more and learn more about what is going on in the story! I wish I had some power stones because I would send you some!

3yr
Chase_Xavier_123
Chase_Xavier_123Lv3

Great story. The story revolves around a girl name Vivian and her cold emotionless love interest in a romance fantasy setting while her friend Jeannie pokes her nose in plot every now and then. The setting of the story is like olympics were bronze,silver, gold category exists. Vivian being in the bronze category rabbit species is indifferent toward the power struggle in the academy while the Gavin is on the top of the food chain being a gold level werewolf. The story shows there journey of love while revolving around the academy of the strongest which is build upon the dead bodies of dead vampires after the war with werewolfs. Writing Quality - Good, you should mention who is talking sometimes it gets confusing. Story development - Steady, Not to fast nor to slow it's perfect from my perspective. Character design - I loved that Vivian is indifferent cause it's realistic this way. We normal people don't really care about the struggle on the top making her feel closer. I am a bit sceptical about Gavin though but I confident he will win me over with time. Story background - It might represents the harry potter style with all the categories and species but with romance as it's priority. (I might not be right only author can say for sure) Will I recommend this book? I will if you are a teenage girl like me looking for a romance fantasy story this might be one for you. (fun fact - Top ten fantasies women have about men consists of were wolfs, vampire, pirates, surgeons. Do you see two in this series?)

3yr
MoYun_ZJ
MoYun_ZJLv2

Writing this review 5 chapters in: Vivian's carefree and vibrant character comes across well in the text. The academy setting with its ranking system is a nice touch too. It would be cool to follow the characters as they grow and level up. Gavin is a bit of a blank at the moment -will read on to see how he grows. The writer seems like she's having fun writing - and it comes across in the text :) There are some grammar and spelling errors, but these can be easily remedied with a free app like Grammarly. :) There were some very long sentences in the first chapter - which got slightly confusing - but this improved in the next few chapters, making the story flow better! One suggestion is to communicate the world's background information (ie. like how the ranking system works) through the form of dialogue, instead of doing an info dump in a few paragraphs. It could make the story flow more naturally. Just a suggestion! Keep writing! Am looking forward to seeing how the plot develops. [img=recommend]

3yr
miu_hozuki
miu_hozukiLv2

The story is very well written. It's easy to loose track of the main object, or over do descriptions, set contradictory character settings in novels that use paranormal setting. However, the author passes them all with panache. Try the story. You just might like it.

3yr
TheMortalGod
TheMortalGodLv1

I am not a fan of romance novels but the vampire and werewolf elements added in the mix kept in interested. Waiting for more chapters to be added.

3yr
Proteety_Promi
Proteety_PromiLv3

The writing quality is amazing! I love the way you describe the scenarios. I love the characters as well and the story is developing in an impressive way. So I think I'm going to give it five stars!

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