Review Detail of Angela_3215 in Throne of the Grand Magus: The beginning

WQ: (3/5). US: (5/5). SD: (3/5). CD: (3/5). WB: (4/5). Start was a little rough but didnt take long before it picked up the main thing about the story. It still is a little slow for reasons i wont spoil 😅 but its interesting just to say. Writing needs improvement but im sure that will naturally happen as we progress. Pretty good, waiting for more [img=update][img=recommend]