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Hand_Number_37
Hand_Number_37Author3yr
2021-11-18 17:11

UPDATED REVIEW: I have come a long way since my last reviews 4 months ago. Things that seemed cool now feels overly exaggerated and unnecessary for Webnovel audience. 1. Even back then I had always taken pride in my writing skills. I won't say that my english is the best, but it is better than the most. So you can course through the entire novel without hitting any major roadblock. 2. The biggest mistake and issue with this novel is the changes in POV upto chapter 124. As i have also written in synopsis, I was inspired by a fav novel series who uses POV changes frequently to present different thoughts. But i was naive to think that the readers here would like that. It is also the reason that most of the readers drop the novel early. But I have learnt, and though I can't change the first 124 chapters, the rest of the novel will be a masterpiece. Those who have patience and like core mystery and action, I would urge to keep reading beyond chapter 124, and I promise you won't be disappointed. 3. Nobody likes to eat one kind of food all week long. This novel has too much action, adventure, and the mysteries are heavy. There are many philosophical things that I have done extensive research on. So a little romance and echhi things can bring the temperature down. (Haha!) All in all, I consider this novel (as of right now) to have a max rating of 3.8 based on the f***kd up mess that i did with POVs. Aside from this, I think its a good novel to read.

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Hand_Number_37
Hand_Number_37Author

4. The fourth point is more of a request than a review. I know the readers here don't like side characters or the MC gone for too long. But all my side characters (those who can be called so) are too important for the novel. And hence, they are like the main characters of their life. So have some mercy on them.

AberrantExistence
AberrantExistenceLv10

I haven鈥檛 read this novel yet, but i Would like to know if this is a harem and if Yes is it big or small harem.

iTride
iTrideLv6

I haven't read this novel but please add harem

Niks16
Niks16Lv2

no reply from author about harem so im gonna wait

Hand_Number_37
Hand_Number_37Author

Hello, sorry but there would be no harem for this MC.

iTride:I haven't read this novel but please add harem
iTride
iTrideLv6

sad but im gonna read it anyways

Hand_Number_37:Hello, sorry but there would be no harem for this MC.
Lorense
LorenseLv11

You got me hooked by the mention of lovecraft elements, pursuit of knowledge and actions. Now, no harem? That's I am talking about. I'm going to read the novel and hopefully persevere until chapter 124. Thank you for your hard work, sir Author.

Hand_Number_37:Hello, sorry but there would be no harem for this MC.
Bobby_Johns
Bobby_JohnsLv11

Waiting for 1 - 2 updates a day is hard, need more. Great story! It's kinda weird though when you make great solid side characters with very good POV changes people don't like that. When you don't make good side characters who are "more than 2d" people don't like that. Which is why I think apps like these are bad for great authors, you change your story to fit people's wants which in turn hurts the story telling. I mean take LOM for example, I don't think it mattered to Fish how much people complained about POV changes but, they weren't given a choice in the matter and he completed his story with POV. Sometimes, you gotta make sure what your story needs goes above reader wants, you can't please everyone but you can most definitely write a great story. I do understand you did what you had to do but yea truly is sad you removed them. Keep up the good work need more.

Deputy618
Deputy618Lv15

this has brought be an immeasurable amount joy and my life is better

Hand_Number_37:Hello, sorry but there would be no harem for this MC.
ShinigamiX19
ShinigamiX19Lv14

any romance at all?

Hand_Number_37:Hello, sorry but there would be no harem for this MC.
Hand_Number_37
Hand_Number_37Author

Yes, but romance isn't centred around MC as of yet. (check my tags for an idea)

ShinigamiX19:any romance at all?
ShinigamiX19
ShinigamiX19Lv14

Oh okay..

Hand_Number_37:Yes, but romance isn't centred around MC as of yet. (check my tags for an idea)
Peaks
PeaksLv14

That was the exact reason i dropped the novel, because of the POVs, I got too confused it just seemed like I was reading something different. I鈥檒l definitely pick it back up just don鈥檛 know when.

Hand_Number_37
Hand_Number_37Author

no issues. fyi i hv edited the first 15 chapters and scratched away a lot of the content out of the novel. so when u pick it up again (if you pick ut up again) start from the beginning. 馃憤

Peaks:That was the exact reason i dropped the novel, because of the POVs, I got too confused it just seemed like I was reading something different. I鈥檒l definitely pick it back up just don鈥檛 know when.
Peaks
PeaksLv14

Got it, thanks.

Hand_Number_37:no issues. fyi i hv edited the first 15 chapters and scratched away a lot of the content out of the novel. so when u pick it up again (if you pick ut up again) start from the beginning. 馃憤
OmnipotentApeGod
OmnipotentApeGodLv11

THINK GOD

Hand_Number_37:Hello, sorry but there would be no harem for this MC.
Duncan_Morin
Duncan_MorinLv3

Excellent, this is great news!

Hand_Number_37:Hello, sorry but there would be no harem for this MC.
Aeser
AeserLv5

Does this also include kingdom building? Or armies led by MC?

Hand_Number_37
Hand_Number_37Author

yes to the second question. but there will be no detailed kingdom building.

Aeser:Does this also include kingdom building? Or armies led by MC?
Llama_92
Llama_92Lv13

You coming back?

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