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BlackFlamerLv133yr
2021-08-27 22:54

Ok, so here I am writing another review for another novel. So let's begin it. Writing quality - good detailed descriptions which make everything seem lively and minimum mistakes too. Story development - at a good pace with enough mysteriousness to make me want to read another chapter. Though it can be a little confusing at first, but once you get over that, it's just plain wonderful. Character design - what to say about this. One word, mysterious, is all I require to describe the characters. They hide secrets and have cunning minds. So yeah, they are not like a Chinese novel MC who face slaps a person 10 times before actually hitting them. Updating stability - as a fellow author, I won't pressure you on this. No matter how many chapters you upload, as long as they are good, everyone will read them. World background - the earth here is completely different from the earth we knew and the author has a unique way of describing everything in detail while keeping it interesting. Good job. Overall - Love your work author! I hope you don't drop it and continue writing the novel with cliffhangers and more mystery.

Galaxy's First Ruler

Hand_Number_37
4.7
289 Chs

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UPDATED REVIEW: I have come a long way since my last reviews 4 months ago. Things that seemed cool now feels overly exaggerated and unnecessary for Webnovel audience. 1. Even back then I had always taken pride in my writing skills. I won't say that my english is the best, but it is better than the most. So you can course through the entire novel without hitting any major roadblock. 2. The biggest mistake and issue with this novel is the changes in POV upto chapter 124. As i have also written in synopsis, I was inspired by a fav novel series who uses POV changes frequently to present different thoughts. But i was naive to think that the readers here would like that. It is also the reason that most of the readers drop the novel early. But I have learnt, and though I can't change the first 124 chapters, the rest of the novel will be a masterpiece. Those who have patience and like core mystery and action, I would urge to keep reading beyond chapter 124, and I promise you won't be disappointed. 3. Nobody likes to eat one kind of food all week long. This novel has too much action, adventure, and the mysteries are heavy. There are many philosophical things that I have done extensive research on. So a little romance and echhi things can bring the temperature down. (Haha!) All in all, I consider this novel (as of right now) to have a max rating of 3.8 based on the f***kd up mess that i did with POVs. Aside from this, I think its a good novel to read.

3yr

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Hello, Author here. I might as well get over with the custom too. I think the synopsis is quite sufficient to give an idea, but I would recommend reading a few chapters. Though I have included a level-up system, the novel's base theme is not about it. With that said, I hope the readers will give the novel a chance, and a review now and then would be much appreciated. [img=recommend] Thanks :)

3yr
Tamir_Altansukh_3099
Tamir_Altansukh_3099Lv3

I have just one word to say to you auther. AMAZING its so mysterias and the mc's weakness was revealed too(im only on chapter46). I think more people should read this novel

3yr
Tamir_Altansukh_3099
Tamir_Altansukh_3099Lv3

Honestly, I can't believe that this book is this unpopular. I would think that it has at least 1m readers. In the first chapters, my head was spinning, but at about the 10th chapter it become a top read for me. I would save fast passes every day to read the book.

3yr
Yashika_Singh09
Yashika_Singh09Lv2

What a novel !! What made me get engrossed in it was its synopsis at first , then the value it had in the chapters was one of the major things . I have read a few fantasy novels , but this one ... It has a different touch to it .. It makes me curious .. Author has astounding writing skills ... Love it!!

3yr
LegateMattius
LegateMattiusLv15

yes, do a read and read this book. Sigma Chad book. . . . . . . .. . . ... . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . .

3yr
Kido_TO
Kido_TOLv4

My Take on The Novel: So far it's been my favourite novel. I have read to its latest chapter 72 in 2 days. And I have to say, it's already one of my most Favourite novels on webnovel at the moment. Interesting Start: At beginning things are very interesting. I was always kept interested in learning about the new World and the most enticing thing was the MC himself. His Opness doesn't come from the fact that he is the mc and got the plot armour but because he has the thrive to learn everything, an urge and mysterious aura around him. For this reason he is called the thousand Faces but very few people knows about this. If this isn't considered OP then what'd be? Let me tell you he is basically the most Intelligent and knowledgeable scientist and a scholar on Earth. And last of all I just love this novel because every words made perfect sense and all comes together to peice together every mysteries. Thanks for reading my Novel.

3yr
UniquesoulVT
UniquesoulVTLv10

I love this book. It's really interesting and kind of inspired me to work on an idea I've had floating about in my mind. The prologue catches your attention immediately, good work

3yr
Wolframio10
Wolframio10Lv4

I'm at chapter 30 and so far the novel has been great. Though I like the system I don't like the way skills are handled and their coldowns, they feel unnatural. I think they should just use mana and don't have coldowns. Just asking: In which chapter does the romance start?

3yr
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