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Nice story about a magic family and their extremely awkward relationship with each other. I like the characters and this world. They seem full of personality and charm. I kinda wish the pacing of the mother's backstory was a little faster and some of the really big paragraphs could use a slicing here and there... But overall, it's just a nice chill read.

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Magic in The Family

Rowan Jayy

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Noted. Not going to do any "re-writing" for the time being, but I'll keep the paragraph thing in mind as I keep writing. Thank you for the review. :)