Rowan_Jay
[I exist] "Magic in the Family" is my work. I'd appreciate a read if you have the time. <3
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It's been two paragraphs and I like this guy.
Creepy
Quick note on dialogue punctuation: , belong inside the dialogue tag. Wrong: "Please stop staring at me", he said, hiding his face behind his wings. Correct: "Please stop staring at me," he said, hiding his face behind his wings. A small thing, but it will make your grammar better. :)
An isekai with death leading to brutal penalties followed by a "re-load" back in time. Heavy focus on gore: if that's your thing, you'll find enjoyment here. After the first chapter, the writing quality picks up. Chapter one was hard to follow as the dialogue isn't tagged, there are too many unknown characters, and the scene has no context. However, once the second chapter hits, the scenes have flow, and the characters have both motivations and context. As of chapter seven, there doesn't seem to be a clear "main goal" beyond "complete quests to level up, and level up to complete quests." However, there are indications of larger powers at play.
Yeah... I'd probably have the same reaction.
Mom for the win!
Let's go, Mom!!
wonder how long she'll stick around for... or how long it will take her to start doing things to make his life worse so he'll want to go back to his old life.
Hmmm... that doesn't seem healthy. XD
That doesn't sound healthy -_-
Like BL with pretty men, a flustered "bride", and fantasy vibes? If yes, then you'll enjoy the read. The writing quality is solid, with few grammatical errors and pros that flow. While predictable for the genera, the story has momentum and doesn't drag. The character designs are pretty and highlight the romance.