Review Detail of ScarletCore in Magic in The Family

Off to a great start! The chapters are often quite short, but there’s something happening in every chapter that keeps you engaged. I can relate to the mermaids sister and the weight of responsibility she must feel having to cater towards her family, and I really like how the author has gone on to describe her growth in just a few chapters. The characters are realistic with depth, and the story is open for opportunities. The Grammer and style is fine, and flows easily. Keep it up!