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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv143yr
2021-09-22 03:36

honestly this story is centered around one thing, the MC being cool and slick in every moment possible. Sly, confident, rebellious, strong. its very generic and cliche. not a horrible story for a fanfic just the MCs personality and story don't mesh at all. overall: average.

A hero always smiles, a true hero does what's needed

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