Review Detail of Rey_G in Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

The author tries to make the characters look smart. BUT, their plots are not more complex than a child's; the main character, for example, suffers from tunnel vision. What? "Voldemort is not a culprit, he is not guilty of all his crimes, NO, he is a victim of society." The author doesn't really understand this type of childish, and veiledly inserted, piece of sociopolitical opinion, and it was probably inserted there to make the character look "big brained;" while, in fact, Voldemort is as guilty as Hitler was when he killed the jews — and everyone who he didn't agree with —, and equally a victim. But the worst of all, the character IS SMERT, so every type of bullshit he spews is THE TRUTH. Then he understood that, no, he won't fix society, it is too rotten, so, yeah, he will let it rot. Then, you understand that the main character is not ruthless, he isn't a cold analyst, he isn't super duper intelligent. No, he is a dumb psychopath/sociopath. But, no, he this is not just this, he didn't really want to let society rot because it was dirty, he just wanted to let it rot because HE COULD, yeah, he could get stronger without anyone, so he was content in letting everyone die. Conclusion: he is not intelligent, he is not "supah genius," he is exactly what would happen if you gave Hitler magical powers. Then, we come to the one dimensional characters, "HOW DARE YOU HAVE DIFFERENT OPINION? WIZARDS WILL LOSE TO MUGGLES? WHAT? YOU MUST BE ANNIHILATED FOR HAVING THIS OPINION," but no, everyone there is SUPPOSED to be super intelligent. There is no really good quality in this fanfic, aside from updating stability and that the plot seems to be developing somehow. But even then: the storytelling is quirky. The author loses his time and goes on a tangent on how some random character's hair was blonde! Or how the previous headmasters smirked when the main character said something ALLEGEDLY intelligent — but hollow to whoever reader really cares.