Review Detail of TheRabbitHole in RIP 2

Strong start to the story, certainly unexpected. Writing is a bit lacking, there's a need to fix some terms instead of the whole structure. But there are moments where it took me time to adjust to the beginning of a scene, but that could just be me, so I'm not sure 😂. Pacing-wise, it was a bit fast-paced at the beginning, which kinda worked in its favor, but overall, it's nice. I like the main heroine's character and I wanna know what's more to her story. Pretty solid, needs improvement, but I liked it. (｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ