Review Detail of Ashley7Black in Back For My Daughter
Review detail
The writing style of the author at the beginning of the story had a nick and pick at places. But the later chaps show that the author has improved his writing style. It is really difficult to follow the schedule and keep up with stable updates. So it is commendable. I like how it was not only abt coming back for his wife but also for his daughter. The daughter's character makes the novel a bit more fluffy. CRITICISM- There are some paras that are loaded with information that makes you wanna skip it(at the beginning of the novel). But it ends up being some useful info which I feel like I later missed. So don't put too much info when a character is introduced-since there are people who try out the novel without having an ounce of knowledge on cultivation. They may feel difficulty in reading it. Except for this, I think it is a great story.
Back For My Daughter
HaoShu
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Criticisms* not critics, but you're doing great! I like reading books with a good plot, but it has to have good grammar in order for me to even consider reading it. Keep at the great work!
HaoShu:Thanks for the review really appreciate it will work hard to overcome the critics and definitely improve.
HaoShu:Thanks for the review really appreciate it will work hard to overcome the critics and definitely improve.
well woman will do love him because of his behavior and care, but he will always love his first wife the most and teh daughter will always be there with him [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Guan_Yu:why does it have an harem tag is it harem? what about his beloved daughter like the title says
so he will also love his harem? but more his first wife .if yes, I find that annoying for me not even gonna start reading cuz prob gonna get hooked first chapters
HaoShu:well woman will do love him because of his behavior and care, but he will always love his first wife the most and teh daughter will always be there with him [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Guan_Yu:so he will also love his harem? but more his first wife .if yes, I find that annoying for me not even gonna start reading cuz prob gonna get hooked first chapters
Hi author, what makes your story different from many immortal dad's novel out there? can it compare to godly stay home dad? thanks
HaoShu:yes
my novel has its focus on the fluffyness of the story giving it a family novel which will make u like it[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Meds:Hi author, what makes your story different from many immortal dad's novel out there? can it compare to godly stay home dad? thanks
kuriosoth:its not a family novel if there is a harem ...oh god when will I find a fluff novel with a male protagonist but without a harem... can someone recommend me one?? oh I've already read the one with Zhang han. đđđ