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Neiger
NeigerLv13yr
2021-07-07 00:49

Bem ,até agora foram postados 3 capítulos em sequencia ,eu achei eles muitos bons ,só que primeiro capitulo foi meio corrido ,as coisas aconteceram muito rápido ,sem muito aprofundamento ,só uns acontecimentos jogados na nossa cara . Eu não gosto muito de história com uma "vibe" tecnológica . Mas a história até agora parece legal ,só não espero que o MC se torne o mais foda em poucos capítulos . Não gosto muito (e acho que ninguém gosta ) quando o protagonista se torna o melhor ,sem nenhum desenvolvimento ou base alguma .Espero que seja uma boa história e que eu possa desfrutar de uma ótima aventura

The Legendary Technomancer

Zhanye
4.4
9 Chs

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TwoAowT
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This is a really good novel, I like the personality of the MC and how he deals with the problems. The Magic system in this world is very creative and make me want to read even more. Well, if I have something to criticize on this novel, I would say it, but I don't have anything haha. Thank you author, keep the good work.

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Goldrum
GoldrumLv10

A very good novel, one of the bests I have read this year to far, if you are thinking about read it, stop thinking, just read, you won't will regret

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Zhanye
ZhanyeAuthor

Shameless 5 star's author review hehe xD Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star

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TheFairyLord
TheFairyLordLv10

Hehe, magic and game development? The pace of the story seems good, and the protagonist is not a brainless, personalityless idiot Sounds fun, you can count on my power stones!

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Cristian666
Cristian666Lv3

Hmm, another Zhanye novel, I really like his work, but I was worried about the refresh rate. From what I saw on the discord server of the other novel, apparently he improved it a lot, I hope it stays that way, I'm excited for the development of the story.

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zeroy
zeroyLv11

Looks promising so far. I like the idea of mixing magic and code. If you are someone who likes tech and magic you should probably try it. But I am concerned about the release schedule as it doesn't look good with his other novel right now.

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Fanfinir
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This novel looks very promising, I'm a big fan of game development and I was surprised to see it being implemented in magic. I hope this goes on as well as the chapters I've read so far!

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Giganpilula
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The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

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Prognastat
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Hoping the author will resume as I’ve enjoyed the premise and there just isn’t enough of it. Interesting world and the writing is good, can’t wait to see where the story goes.

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GhostRevenant
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This is a very good idea for a story, I want to see it expanded more. I understand that the author did this for contest, but I really do hope they'll keep writing it regardless of its performance there as it is a really good story.

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