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Jheydi327
Jheydi327Lv142yr
2023-01-07 19:28

Welp..NGL the First 250 Chapters are great.. The Plot and story is going well untill this Esmeralda thing come into play... Sorry Author but I feel like the Arc Quality drops drastically when MC got abducted by this disgusting Vice president.. It's great but meh.. This really ruins my mood... Goodluck

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100 chapters Sigh* This as far i can go. I enjoyed this novel mainly bec of the wholesome parts 😏. But the mc is nothing special he is mainly used as a boy toy and most of the time helping his girls sort out ther problems all in name of love🤷🏼‍♂️ There was a little bit of character development but at the same time it wasnt enough for that many chapters he just didnt change that much.. It does get frustrasting reading about how the mc has nothing going on for him as you read on. Yes Unfortunatly the MC is all talk half of the time mainly when it about to his life. Granted he had his moments but he does not make reasonable goals and it feels like he has barely no ambitions to improve his Situation. Basically he does not take any practical steps so far. Tbf He does often go to the library? But finds Little answers that will help with explaining his power. Tho it just ends up his girlfreinds find all answers for him. To me the MC is just useless id rather read a novel about his girlfriend lol. At the end of the day he does not have his prioritys right as he is all over the place with his emotions. But hey this just i what think✌️ Good luck

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this novel is not for everyone... first author unnecessary comments, annoying.. mc character is not likable, he thinks he is the problem of everything too much, which many readers don't like it... and other things which I am not going to write...

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MCs characters keeps going downhill. One of the worst harems easily and well ruined it at the ra$e out of nowhere along with the stupid justifications.

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